PLEASE HELP ME I SPENT 99 POINTS AND PLEASE READ TWO PAGES AND THE THIRD PAGE IS THE QUESTIONS SO YOU GUYS CAN ANSWER THEM ALSO (WHOEVER ANSWER WILL GET BRAINLIST GUARANTEED)

part A

The story of franklins experiment has interested people since Franklin first described it.

part B

He was flying a kite with a piece of metal attached to the top while people were indoors to prove that lightning is a form of electricity.

The bolt of lightening struck his kite and travelled down the string and charging a metal key at the end,he touched the key and the very evident electric spark he felt his theory was correct.

Part A: The story of Benjamin Franklin flying the kite has interested people since Benjamin Franklin first described it.

Part B:

First Sentence: He when outside while it was raining with a kite and a metal key attached to it and then, when lightning struck the metal key was charged with electricity.

Second Sentence: So, when he found out that the bolt of lighting did in fact travel down into the metal key and charged it with electricity it therefore, proved that his theory about it was completely correct.

Explanation:

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to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.