What would make the author's argument more effective?
Read the excerpt from "Healthy Eating."
Unless you're trying to lose weight, nutritionists like to
avoid diets.
"We were just laughing about that, like we could sell fairy
dust and that's pretty much what a lot of these fad diets
are about," said Natalie Castro-Romero, the corporate
dietician at Baptist who oversees the company's 15,000
employees
"One very common thing that happens is people feel
overwhelmed and they need a starter to get something
going, like a detox, but there's no truth behind that."
O addressing a counterclaim
O including a quotation from an expert
O adding statistics about dieting
O adding facts about why diets do not work.
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