Which changes should be made to establish and maintain
formal writing conventions? Select two options.
Read the email, and then answer the question.
Subject: Traffic Jams Near Blake High School
Dear Representative Lindstrom,
Change "Thank you" to "Thanks" in the first paragraph.
Change "blocked" to "lousy" in the first paragraph.
Thank you for your hard work on behalf of the citizens of
community. The purpose of this email is to bring to your
attention issues related to traffic near Blake High School. As
you may know, there are two main entrances to the high
school: one off Main Street and one off Eames Way. Both of
these become blocked at the beginning and end of the
school day.
Delete "Being late to school is a major bummer." in the
second paragraph
Change "I'm" to "I am" in the third paragraph.
Make the final paragraph longer.
I did some research and found that there have been three
accidents in the last month alone. Although these have all
been minor collisions, they create major delays for students
trying to get to school. Being late to school is a major
bummer. The timing on the traffic light should be changed
before there is a more serious accident.