Students were asked to write a response to an excerpt from Barrio Boy. Tyler selected the excerpt below.

We stayed only one day at the hotel, long enough for me to become acquainted with the bathtub, located in another closet next to the toilet. A rope of water twisted and whirled from a brass faucet, filling the tub. I sat in the cold water up to my neck and discovered that I could slide down the back of the tub and hit the bottom with a great splash. When my water party was interrupted, both the bathroom and I got a scrubbing.

Which would be the most clear and detailed topic sentence to begin Tyler’s response?

In this excerpt, the author takes a bath and writes a lot about the details and he gets in some trouble.
In this excerpt, the author uses the bathtub and it is very cold and splashy.
In this excerpt, the author uses descriptive language to share his experience in a modern American bathroom.
In this excerpt, he tells about a tub and a faucet and a lot of new experiences he has in the United States.

"get off of your lazy bum and come running with me or i'm dumping this pitcher of water on u " u say with a smile. she thinks your joking so she ignores you about 10 seconds later shes screaming wile water is dripping everywhere you say "here comes the second one! " then you here her say okay, your such a j e r k ! ill be ready in 5 put the pitcher down " she say in an angry tone. and you smile in victory

good enough?

malvolio only loves olivia because he thinks if they get married to olivia he will have a noble title, people to serve him, and fine clothes to wear. also he thinks if they get married he will have many expensive things, and he thinks he will be able to order toby around. malvolio only wants to be noble and boss people around he dose not really love olivia. but viola love for duke orsino is real she really loves orsino.

i think he will fail because he tried to get her to love him and she said oh, you are sick of self-love, malvolio. there is no slander in an allowed fool. so i think she knows what malvolio is trying to do. she knows that he only wants to marry her because he wants to be noble and boss people around so that it why i think she said oh, you are sick of self-love, malvolio. there is no slander in an allowed fool because she new he was selfish.

the relationship between friendship and dreams are that if you dream to be in a friendship with the person you dreamed of it might happen just keep dreaming.