What is the single most important problem that should be addressed in the
following paragraph during global revision?
AIDS is a widespread problem in our society today. Millions of children are
without parents because their parents died of AIDS. People die every day
because of the disease. Still more are infected. What can we do to fix the
problem of AIDS?
O
A. Organization
B. Thesis
O
C. Paragraph development
O
D. Spelling