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Lan Dog sleep in the tent with us tonight Dad I ask grabbing Dog around the belly so that he can't run
pff after a frenzied squirrel We can't have that Sarah Dad says The tent is for humans Dog wants to
sleep outside where the air is fresh If any dog deserves to sleep inside it's him I say Plus it's raining Dog
oves the rain says Dad Gloopy brain, gloopy brain he sings Dad is always singing to himself He's that
cort of dad No Dog hates the rain I say defiantly as Dog breaks free and trots off cheerfully through the
nammering drops into the under brush He's having the time of his life says Dad Now get inside before
ou're soaked I'll lead Dog over to the others My furs are soggy and my tangled hair is full of drips |
eave Dad to chase after Dog and I clamber into the tent

        "Can Dog sleep in the tent with us tonight, Dad?" I ask grabbing Dog around the belly so that he can't run

        "Pff, after a frenzied squirrel! We can't have that Sarah." Dad says "The tent is for humans Dog wants to sleep outside where the air is fresh."

         "If any dog deserves to sleep inside it's him!" I say.

          "Plus it's raining, Dog loves the rain!" says Dad "Gloopy brain, gloopy brain!" he sings Dad is always singing to himself He's that sort of dad.

"No, Dog hates the rain!" I say defiantly as Dog breaks free and trots off cheerfully through the Hammering drops into the under brush

     "He's having the time of his life!" says Dad "Now get inside before you're soaked, I'll lead Dog over to the others!" My furs are soggy and my tangled hair is full of drips, I leave Dad to chase after Dog and I clamber into the tent.

Done?

Can Dog sleep in the tent with us tonight, Dad?" I ask grabbing Dog around the belly so that he can't run

       "Pff, after a frenzied squirrel! We can't have that Sarah." Dad says "The tent is for humans Dog wants to sleep outside where the air is fresh."

        "If any dog deserves to sleep inside it's him!" I say.

         "Plus it's raining, Dog loves the rain!" says Dad "Gloopy brain, gloopy brain!" he sings Dad is always singing to himself He's that sort of dad.

"No, Dog hates the rain!" I say defiantly as Dog breaks free and trots off cheerfully through the Hammering drops into the under brush

    "He's having the time of his life!" says Dad "Now get inside before you're soaked, I'll lead Dog over to the others!" My furs are soggy and my tangled hair is full of drips, I leave Dad to chase after Dog and I clamber into the tent.

Done?

i think the literacy device is "it's frozen head"

"the sandy walls seemed to collapse in on themselves"

and

"the bloodshot waters seemed to have no bottom"