Read the passage.

His kite went into electrical wires. A spark of electricity lit the kite. Pieces of burning kite drifted into nearby trees, starting a forest fire.

Which revision is needed for this passage?

a. Put the second sentence at the end.

b. Use the verbs “flew” and “ignited” instead of “went” and “lit.”

c. Clarify the main idea in the third sentence.

d. Eliminate the third sentence.

Fill in the blanks mommy told the kids, who promised they up their rooms by lunch, that they would go to the park. a would cleanb cleanedc have cleaned

Amy tried to write her essay but she was distracted by the phone ring the sentence above combines a. an independent clayse and a dependent clause b. two independent clauses c. a dependent clause d. none if the above

Asap read the bottom. use these 7 words to make 2 similies, 2 personification, 2 metaphors, and 1 of any so much backpack toaster drummer beach heart bicycle microwave examples: (if the examples were a quarterback, a wave, and stars) 1. the quarterback is a cheetah running down the field. (metaphor) 2. like a wave, the birds in autumn move through the air crashing into invisible shores. (simile) 3. the stars danced in the night sky. (personification) remember to write using complete, correctly capitalized sentences for each of the examples you provide. also, proofread and spell check carefully.