Look at your rough draft. Copy the most awkward sentence you have written. Look up a way to change that sentence with an online source or by using a grammar or syntax manual, such as Tufte’s Artful Sentences. Explain why the original sentence was awkward.

On one of his many outings through the brobdingnagian countryside, gulliver walks on a small path through a field. during this walk on the small path, how does gulliver get dirty? a. the dwarf throws at gulliver, b. the queen of brobdingnagian steps on gulliver, c. gulliver gets caught in a rainstorm, and d. gulliver falls in cow dung.