Dickens was a very popular novelist, but he had to set a grueling schedule for himself in order to meet his public's demands, for many of his novels were serialized, so he had to publish a new installment every week.
(A) The sentence uses excessive coordination.
(B) The sentence uses excessive slang
(C) The sentence does not have enough independent clauses
(D) The sentence uses excessive subordination.

A

Explanation:

Clauses are independent:

Dickens

but he had

for many

so he had

Almost all of them have a coordinating conjunction. We can consider an excess.

There is no slang; it has a lot of independent clauses. There are not subordinate clauses.

explanation:

b the manazanar relocation center was located in california. it was used to keep japanise from spying on america.

the reasons for the harsh treatment, is because japan used tourist to take pictures and snapshots of pearl harbor.

many americans were afraid that the japanise would betray them for their mother country. through and means necessary. this means that, the leadership in japan is a lot different than it is here. culture and family ties has much to do with their outlook and worldview.