Which sentence will fatima’s teacher most likely ask her to revise ?

The sentence that Fatima's teacher will most likely ask her to revise is "Having moved up north just last year, I experienced my first snowstorm this past winter"

According to Fatima's essay, she writes about her first experience of a snowstorm and how it started off gently at first, and grew into a huge snowstorm which left the trees and branches clacked.

To revise something means to go through the work and make necessary corrections.

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