4. Judy asked Sarah to help her edit the following paragraph. Identify the correct example of
editing
Tony and Mark decided to open a coffe shop on the corner of elm Street and 8th Avenue. Much
to their shock, in the first week Tony and Mark have made no sales and begin to worry if their
business endeavor was a smart one With $10,000 dollars from the bank the two men purchase
all the supplies needed to begin their first week.. After a little advertisng and free samples, the
shop is doing much better.
O Sarah corrects the spelling of the word advertising in the last sentence.
Sarah informs Judy that the essay is not organized properly.
Sarah suggests to Judy that she have a solid thesis statement.
Sarah suggests to Judy that the paragraph should be coherent.

answer:

sarah corrects the spelling of the word advertising in the last sentence

Explanation:

just add on too that

explanation:

each year on march 8, international women’s day is celebrated around the globe. it’s an important opportunity to shine a spotlight on women’s involvement, contributions, and accomplishments on a range of issues from domestic violence to the role of women in the c-suite. the theme this year is “be bold for change”― a dictum that those who know me personally will acknowledge has pretty much been my mantra throughout my career on wall street, in media and most recently, in philanthropy.the empowerment of girls as leaders, who can be emboldened today to become even stronger leaders tomorrow, is an increasingly recognized imperative in our world, and it couldn’t be closer to my heart