Visiting officials, who have not signed in at the registration desk, will not receive their admission tickets in time for tonight's performance.

Which correctly explains how to revise this sentence?

A) The two commas should be deleted.
B) The apostrophe should be deleted.
C) The first comma should be deleted.
D) The apostrophe should be placed after the s.

Yosemite has spectacular scenery and which has half-time bears. how do i write i. parallel structure?

Subject: save the whales! dear professor crest, i know you are really busy and everything, but i was hoping that you could spend more time thinking about how to save the whales. it’s up to us to speak up on their behalf. it’s really wrong that some amusement parks use these poor, defenseless animals for recreational purposes. this must be stopped, and you’re the person to do it! ttyl, jules which revisions would make this e-mail more formal? check all that apply. a. removing the contractions b. removing the exclamation points c. removing the salutation d. removing the slang and casual speech e. removing the information about amusement parks

What event in english history came to be known as the glorious revolution? a. the overthrow and execution of charles i by parliament b. the revolution led by oliver cromwell to rescue protestants in ireland c. the overthrow of james ii and the crowning of william iii and his wife, mary ii d. the return of charles ii and his crowning as the english monarch