In no fewer than three sentences, critique the following paragraph. explain where it could be improved. then, in your own words, rewrite the paragraph to make its writing stronger. make sure you include a hook, supporting evidence, and a topic sentence. use correct spelling and grammar.
playing in the snow is one of my happiest childhood memories. the winter offers more than a time for kids to have fun. there are many things to do in the snow. it is unfortunate that so many people find the wintertime annoying. more people should step outside to enjoy the snow. i am glad i grew up where it snows.

Although I could easily rewrite the paragraph, I'm not going to do your work for you. I will, however, critique it for you so that YOU can make the necessary improvements.

* You need to include specific support regarding what was fun and how you had fun.

* Stay focused on your experiences; avoid telling me about other people and of your opinions about them.

well it is hard to say but everyone learns at there own pace  

i learn slow so it would take me like awhile

i hope i was so kinda

and if i was you in would goggle it and watch videos or go to your friends and ask them or maybe even your teacher for extra

the correct option is c) “logical reasons.”

writers should explain their position by writing logical reasons. in order to build effective arguments, clear evidence and logical ideas should be used to support the writers’ position.

counterclaims are used when the writers do not agree with a claim proposed by another author.

fair rebuttals are used by writers when a counterclaim to their position is being presented.