Hello,
could someone correct the grammatical errors ? i am not english, so i made mistakes. (no need to copy the entire text, but just the mistakes.)

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Not sure how you're going to copy this down, you might need to re-format but I did find a few mistakes throughout the text (not too many.) You wrote quite an interesting essay :)

Explanation:

(FIRST SECTION)

This method was well established, by

claiming to come to fix their water

system, Mr. Bannon took the

opportunity to extract money with

a check for $500 after this false

performance. Throughout October

2019 and January 2020, seven

retirees were the subject of his

practices in the city of Denver. Mr. Bannon was then identified by people who recognized him.

(QUOTE)

This was the first time something like this happened to me in 60 years...

(SECOND SECTION)

change this sentence,

INCORRECT>"A victim testified  and clarified the facts. "

CORRECT >"A victim testified  and clarified these facts. "

(THIRD SECTION):

"He asked me for a check for $500. When I went to get the check, I found out he had ransacked my closets. He stole $300 and some precious jewelry. Shocked, I didn't know what to do or say..."

(note: I wasn't quite sure if he was currently ransacking her closets while she was in the house or if he ransacked her house and then left, so I can only assume that the sentence was supposed to be in past tense.)

(FOURTH SECTION)

Thus, Mr. Banon also took advantage of the vulnerability of the elderly to steal goods such as paintings, jewels, and pocket money that remained in the house.

(FINAL SECTION)

Today, the criminal charges brought against Mr. Bannon are, trademark counterfeiting (for the use of the Denver city water service trademark) fraud, and theft of the goods. Mr. Bannon faces up to 1.5 years in prison and approximately $100,000 in fines.

write two paragraphs to compare and contrast the narrators’ schools and explain how their schools shape their perspectives toward the hijab. cite evidence from the text to support your ideas.

copy and paste answer:

two paragraphs to compare and contrast the narrator's schools would be this, the one school with the veil is the one school were the students were forced to wear the veils, and they did not know why they had to wear the veils. the girl student writing the story was not like the other students, she didn't care. in the second school there was a lot of hostile activities going on throughout the school. most of the students were upset and this, including the author, but she was trying to look and the good side of things.  

overall, both schools had something that the students or most of the students did not like or appreciate. what you can learn from these stories is that life will never be exactly how you may want it to be. complaining about your lifestyle will only make matters worse or at least feel worse in the long run. that's happens to be the information you can interpret from these two stories.