100 pts read the excerpts from chapter 4 of the call of the wild, and then respond to the journal prompt that follows. buck made no effort. he lay quietly where he had fallen. the lash bit into him again and again, but he neither whined nor this was the first time buck had failed, in itself a sufficient reason to drive hal into a rage. he exchanged the whip for the customary club. buck refused to move under the rain of heavier blows which now fell upon him. like his mates, he was barely able to get up, but unlike them, he had made up his mind not to get up. he had a vague feeling of impending doom. this had been strong upon him when he pulled in to the bank, and it had not departed from him. what of the thin and rotten ice he had felt under his feet all day, it seemed that he sensed disaster close at so greatly he had suffered, and so far gone was he, that the blows did not hurt much. and as they continued to fall upon him, the spark of life within flickered and went down. it was nearly out. he felt strangely and then suddenly, without warning, uttering a cry that was inarticulate and more like the cry of an animal, john thornton sprang upon the man who wielded the club. like the rest of the novel, the above excerpt is written from third-person point of view. rewrite the excerpt, using first-person point of view instead, with buck as your narrator. think about how the event might be told differently through the eyes of buck. make sure that you use descriptive words and phrases that create a visual image for the reader, just as jack london did in the original.

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Explanation:

As I sit thtere I make no effort to struggle I know I have done something wrong I dont even whine It was the first time I have ever falied I have given a sufficent reason to drive Hal into rage As he changes the whip for the customary club I refuse to move as the blows come torwards me it stings and it is hard but I have deserved it like my freinds I am barly able to get up but then I make the choice to refuse to give up as I have a strange sensation of a impending doom as I lay there I remember the thin and rotten ice I have felt under my feet all day it seemed that I sensed that disaster is close at hand as  I as I lay there and Think I all of a sudden feel the pain rush back into my body and sense all I have suffered I guess that blows dont hurt to much but as the blows fall upon me I feel the spark of life flicker away I was nearly dead feeling the warm rays of heaven when all of a sudden John Thorton spran upon the man who weilded the club.

Explanation:

i hope you get it As I sit there I make no effort to struggle I know I have done something wrong I dont even whine It was the first time I have ever falied I have given a sufficient reason to drive Hal into rage As he changes the whip for the customary club I refuse to move as the blows come torwards me it stings and it is hard but I have deserved it like my freinds I am barly able to get up but then I make the choice to refuse to give up as I have a strange sensation of a impending doom as I lay there I remember the thin and rotten ice I have felt under my feet all day it seemed that I sensed that disaster is close at hand as  I as I lay there and Think I all of a sudden feel the pain rush back into my body and sense all I have suffered I guess that blows dont hurt to much but as the blows fall upon me I feel the spark of life flicker away I was nearly dead feeling the warm rays of heaven when all of a sudden John Thornton span upon the man who wielded the club.

yes you could be a life guard if that the question.