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as i wander around the destroy kingdom of camelot looking for the sinful jabberwocky. i can see many different kinds of beasts and monsters in the kingdom like the dire wolfs and the green goblins but in front of them are the mythical jabberwocky. i quickly pull out the vorpal sword that my parent gave me then charge at the dire wolfs and the goblins, in one swing i manage to cut through all the dire wolf and the goblin, but then the jabberwocky swing it enormous tail at me that almost kill me but somehow i manage to dodge the strong jabberwocky tail then come the second tail of the jabberwocky swing at me knocking on the ground i got no more energy to stand up, i was powerless against the jabberwocky. as i close my eye thinking to myself “why would anyone trust me to kill the mythical jabberwocky” then a bright light overcome my mind without any hesitation i stand up and grab the vorpal sword. i swiftly jump forward to the jabberwocky as my sword whistles through the air and into the jabberwocky head. the jabberwocky head drop at the ground then i can feel that my body was running through emotion of relief but then i fainted without knowing it.

Read the passage. excerpt from "why equal pay is worth fighting for" by senator elizabeth warren, april 17, 2014 i honestly can't believe that we're still arguing over equal pay in 2014. when i started teaching elementary school after college, the public school district didn't hide the fact that it had two pay scales: one for men and one for women. women have made incredible strides since then. but 40 years later, we're still debating equal pay for equal work. women today still earn only 77 cents for every dollar a man earns, and they're taking a hit in nearly every occupation. bloomberg analyzed census data and found that median earnings for women were lower than those for men in 264 of 265 major occupation categories. in 99.6 percent of occupations, men get paid more than women. that's not an accident; that's discrimination. the effects of this discrimination are real, and they are long lasting. today, more young women go to college than men, but unequal pay makes it harder for them to pay back student loans. pay inequality also means a tougher retirement for women. . for middle-class families today, it usually takes two incomes to get by, and many families depend as much on mom's salary as they do on dad's, if not more. women are the main breadwinners, or joint breadwinners, in two-thirds of the families across the country, and pay discrimination makes it that much harder for these families to stay afloat. women are ready to fight back against pay discrimination, but it's not easy. today, a woman can get fired for asking the guy across the hall how much money he makes. here in the senate, sen. barbara mikulski (d-md.) introduced the paycheck fairness act to give women the tools to combat wage discrimination. it would ensure that salary differences have something to do with the actual job that they are doing, and not just because they are women. senator warren states that the effects of pay discrimination are long-lasting. is this a valid argument supported by accurate evidence? no; warren weakens her point by claiming that the paycheck fairness act would "give women the tools to combat wage discrimination." yes; warren supports her point by noting, "for middle-class families today, it usually takes two incomes to get by." yes; warren supports her point by noting, "pay inequality also means a tougher retirement for women." no; warren weakens her point by noting, "today, a woman can get fired for asking the guy across the hall how much money he makes."