What makes this an effective conclusion?
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it synthesizes ideas and has a clear call to action to
live up to the standards of a great country.
it does not synthesize ideas, but instead introduces
new appeals to the audience's logic and emotion,
read the passage and answer the question that follows.
we are citizens of a great country, on the verge of bold
advance, and we have to live up to that high standard. all
of us, to whatever religion we may belong, are equally the
children of india with equal rights, privileges and
obligations. we cannot encourage communalism or
narrow-mindedness, for no nation can be great whose
people are narrow in thought or in action.
to the nations and peoples of the world we send
greetings and pledge ourselves to cooperate with them in
furthering peace, freedom and democracy
and to india, our much-loved motherland, the ancient,
the eternal and the ever-new, we pay our reverent
homage and we bind ourselves afresh to her service. jai
hind (victory to india).
- "a tryst with destiny,"
jawaharlal nehru
it restates the claim in a clear way, and it also
makes no mention of future action on the part of the
audience.
it has a clear call to action for the audience to
practice communalism and to continue focusing on
differences.