All of the following are strategies involved in revision except

checking for redundant language.

getting rid of euphemisms and clichés.

removing overly complicated language.

coming up with new ideas and topics

Fine fellow, that lebrun," said arobin when robert had gone. "i never heard you speak of him.""i knew him last summer at grand isle," she replied.  what becomes apparent during this conversation? robert and arobin are both aware they are rivals for edna’s affections.arobin is unaware of robert’s role in edna’s life, but robert is aware of arobin’s role.robert is completely unaware of arobin’s romantic intentions and love for edna.robert has much more confidence in himself than arobin does.

Based on the information in the passage, what conclusion can the reader make?

What was jonas’s reaction to watching the release ceremony