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the following is a sample thesis. the quotation portion needs revision and clarity. revise to strengthen the claim being presented.
consumers are easily fooled by advertisements because "they always want more stuff and are willing to pay for it."

You could revise it like this:

Consumers are easily fooled by advertisements because they find interest in items that may look needed, but are actually just wanted material objects, and they end up investing in it, 9 out of 10 times this happens.

he wants to suppress a potential uprising of the animals.

he wants to distract the animals from learning the truth.

he wants to prove to the other animals that he is

powerful

explanation:

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