Francie is revising her research paper on the industrial
revolution in the united states. read the section she's
working on at the moment:
in the united states, it was new england's thriving textile
industry that began the industrial revolution. the first u. s.
textile mill was established by an englishman who had
immigrated to massachusetts, bringing with him the new
milling technologies that had already revolutionized industry
in his home country. more mills soon followed, setting off a
domino effect in the u. s. economy.
one area that was immediately impacted was the
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Proofread the passage and identify the spelling and punctuation errors. no one knows the exect cause of diabetes. most people who get type 2 diabetes are older, but now younger people are being diagnosed with it. like many young people, you are probably thinking, "why should i be concerned about diabetes? " the truth is that both the center for disease control and the american diabetes association are quite alarmed about the increase in type 2 diabetes among young people. information gathered in the 1990s showed a rapid increase in type 2 diabetes in children. during the 2000s, this trend is continue. scientists who study diabetes are finding that 85 percent of the children who are diagnosed with type 2 diabetes are overweight. but that is just one reason for the increase. children are at risk for type 2 diabetes if they are inactive, have a family history of diabetes, or are from african american, american indian, or asian american families.