Lauren is writing an article for the local newspaper about adopting a pet from the shelter. she needs to revise her article so it is more heartfelt and convinces readers to adopt a shelter pet. which task would be most appropriate for lauren to do while revising the article?

to replace weak words and phrases with more concrete ones

to describe the layout of the shelter in detail so people know what to expect

to include personal experiences of people who have adopted from the shelter

to add clear and logical transitions between ideas

What is the allure of fear? what have you learned from the story about portrayals of fear in literature?

1.at the trials, she won both the 50 and 100 meter freestyle events. 2.her last olympic appearance was at the 2000 sydney games. 3.now her sights are set on olympic history at the 2008 beijing games. 4.dara torres is an amazing swimmer who qualified at the olympic trials to become the oldest olympic female swimmer. 5.with that excellent performance, she is eligible to contend for a medal at the olympics. what is the most logical order for these sentences?

Sister carrie, chapter ii theodore dreiser how does the author prepare readers for the last full paragraph of this passage? a) the author introduces carrie by showing readers the similarities between carrie and her sister, who is married to a hardworking man. b) the author introduces carrie as the jealous sibling of minnie, who works hard to make carrie feel welcome without upsetting her own marital balance. c) the author introduces carrie as an observant and young woman who notices the routine of her sister and brother-in-law, with whom she is staying. d) the author introduces carrie as a rather selfish and naive young woman who accepts the hospitality of her sister and brother-in-law until she can find a job in the city.