Can you fix this for me with some transition words and signal phrases and see if there any words wrong i just got 20 min left can you and tell me what you changed about it so i can understand will give crown i promise

most importantly, we need to find a solution to reduce this number of jellyfishes. students in a japanese high school wanted to and find ideas to control them. one way, since humans can eat jellyfishes, they suggested to cook the jellyfishes and turn them into a caramel candy. in this way, people and sea fishes will get less effects and control the number of jellyfish. here is a fun fact did you know that ‘’some species of jellyfish can release up to 40,000 eggs daily” that why there are so many of them in the sea’s, and beaches .