Writing with strong evidence
point: mortimer contrasts the experiences of modern how does the evidence most clearly support the
readers to the experiences of elizabethans.
point?
evidence: for example, mortimer states, "those
it gives an example of how modern and
things that elizabethans take for granted are
elizabethan perspectives differ
precisely what you will find most striking: the huge its use of second-person point of view
open fields, the muddy roads, and the small size of so
readers imagine elizabethan england.
many laborers' houses."
the term "striking" allows readers to envision the
landscape
details like open fields allow modern readers to
understand the elizabethan perspective.
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