Read the introduction to an argumentative essay.
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(1) graffiti artists are gaining worldwide recognition for their
art work. (2) graffiti art deserves to be treated like "real" art
because, like other types of art, it has its own unique style,
contains artistic elements like color and composition, and
expresses the emotions and viewpoints of the artists.
how can the writer revise the introduction to be more effective?

Read the passage. (1) since prehistoric times, milk has been a vital source of nutrition for human beings. (2) some doctors and nutritionists believe that consuming milk can be detrimental to our health. (3) milk is one of the most nutrient-dense beverages we can consume and it should be an essential part of a healthy diet. (4) drinking just one 8-ounce glass of milk per day puts you well on your way to meeting recommended daily intakes for important nutrients. which transition would be best to use at the beginning of sentence 2? finally additionally however specifically