Read the introduction to an argumentative essay.
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(1) graffiti artists are gaining worldwide recognition for their
art work. (2) graffiti art deserves to be treated like "real" art
because, like other types of art, it has its own unique style,
contains artistic elements like color and composition, and
expresses the emotions and viewpoints of the artists.
how can the writer revise the introduction to be more effective?