How do the narrator, dravot, and peachy each represent an aspect of the british empire?

On the one hand, Peachy represent the good side of British Empire. He always obeys the rules and very kind. He is a selfless man that he always thinks of others’ welfare before himself.

On the other hand,  Dravot depicts the bad side of British Empire. He never follows the rules; his decisions are always based on his own point-of-view. His desire to be the only one ruling the country and possess power made the empire slowly fall to the ground.  He gradually slaughters the empire, transforms it into an awful region.

the author is intending to draw attention to the plight of refugees, editorial and biography support this. both workpieces make the reader empathize with enrique as well as with the other young migrants from central america. the writer, however, is using a different approach to each text.

the editorial includes strong words to persuade readers. he is trying hard to convince readers in the us to change its refugee approach.

the biography relies on narrative techniques and figurative language which the writer uses wisely in the setting, characterization, and personification to educate readers on the topic.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.