This introductory paragraph is missing a hook: for many students, college is the first time they will live away from the comforts of their childhood homes. college is a time for making the first of life's many grown-up decisions. it is important to consider both the benefits and drawbacks to living on- or off-campus in order to have the best experience during your college career. which of the following options would be the most effective hook? college students usually live in dormitories on campus, but sometimes they live in other places, like apartments or houses. college students must get used to eating cafeteria foor rather than home cooked meals. what's worse, seeing your roommate's dirty socks in a pile in your dorm, or having to wake up a half hour earlier to drive to class instead of simply walking across campus? there are three key points to consider about where to live during college: social life, privacy, and cost of living.

Read the paragraph. theodore roosevelt was the greatest president because as a leader of the progressive party, he brought about much-needed social, political, and economic reform. one of his economic reforms was to break up many large business trusts. by doing so, he took economic power out of the hands of the wealthy and powerful corporations and placed it in the hands of the ordinary people. theodore roosevelt’s reform policies, known as the square deal, to give the average citizen an equal share of opportunities. which sentence is the thesis of this paragraph? theodore roosevelt was the greatest president because as a leader of the progressive party, he brought about much-needed social, political, and economic reforms. one of his economic reforms was to break up many large business trusts. by doing so, he took economic power out of the hands of the people and placed it in the hands of the ordinary people. theodore roosevelt’s reform policies, known as the square deal, to give the average citizen an equal share of opportunities.