Which sentence corrects the incorrect sentence? 20

incorrect sentence: the agenda for the evening is as follows first we will eat dinner then we will go for a walk finally we will watch a movie.

choices:

the agenda for the evening is as follows: first, we will eat dinner, then, we will go for a walk; finally, we will watch a movie.

or

the agenda for the evening is as follows: first, we will eat dinner; then, we will go for a walk; finally, we will watch a movie.

"The agenda for the evening is as follows: First, we will eat dinner; Then, we will go for a walk; Finally, we will watch a movie." (The second choice)

Explanation:

The first choice is incorrect because there should be a semicolon in between each thing you list. This is not present the in the first choice, but it is in the second, so therefore, the second choice is the correct one.

Hope it helps! :-)

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

what was your story about? i remember this from my language arts class in flvs! i had ms. rosemeyer.