Grammar
find 10 errors in the paragraph. then rewrite the paragraph below.
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it is often said that the path to success is not a straight line instead, the path
to success is a jagged line filled with ups and downs. if a person wants wants to be
successful at a task in a career, or in a sport. they must work very hard. business
strategists have identified won characteristic of successful people: accountability
accountability is not only accepting responsibility for your actions, but also willing
to accept the outcomes of you're choices decisions actions. when faced with a
problem, you have two choices. you can take responsibility for the problem or
you can be the victim of the problem. the idea of accountability can be illustrated
by a ladder. the higher you is on the ladder, the more responsible and
accountable you are for your actions. the lower you are on ladder, the more you
are willing to blame others and outside circumstances for your problems.

It is often said that the path to success is not a straight line, instead the path to success is a jagged line filled with ups and downs. If a person wants to be successful at a task in a career, or in a sport, they must work very hard.strategists have identified one characteristic of successful people: accountability. Accountability is not only accepting responsibility for you actions, but also willing to accept the outcomes of your choices,decisions, and actions. When faced with a problem, you have two choices, you can take responsibility for the problem, or you can be the victim of the problem. The idea of accountability can be illustrated by a ladder. The higher you are on the ladder,the more responsible and accountable you are for your actions . The lower you are on the ladder, the more you're willing to blame others and outside circumstances for your problems.

Explanation:

answer: b

explanation:

"character is what you are in the dark." dwight lyman moody, in this very witty quotation of his, states we act and think differently when we are "in the dark", that is, when the spotlight is not on us and everyone can see us and consequently judge us. when reading, we tend to be sympathetic to some characters and their dilemmas. by being so, we are saying to ourselves that we agree with those characters' acts and choices, even if they are morally questionable if we have common sense in mind. dwight lyman moody's quotation applies very well to "crime and punishment", by   19th century russian writer fiodor dostoyevsky. raskolnikov, the main character, a former law student who spends his days reflecting upon life and its misery, draws a fatal conclusion: mankind is divided in two main categories: ordinary and extraordinary people. the first are the ones who lead a run-of-the-mill existence and are full of imperfections; the latter are the ones who are spiritually superior, the ones who always know better, and have the right to judge the ordinary ones, as well as eliminate them if for common good. raskolnikov considers himself as belonging to the extraordinary category and decides to kill an old lady who is a money lender and in whose house he rents a small room. raskolnikov compares himself to napoleon, who had the undeniable right to execute tons of people during the war in order to save his nation. of course what the main character decides to do is a horrendous crime, but as readers we feel it is the right thing for him to do, since the victim is a mean old woman who only thinks about money and keeps humiliating her younger sister. what one experiences is a mixture of sympathy and empathy for the character, even though he decides to commit homicide, which is not at all accepted or tolerated by civilized citizens. however, since readers are "in the dark", they allow themselves to feel in ways they would probably never dare to confess to anyone, no matter how nasty or vicious a character can be. after all, they are just reading and doing no harm. in other words, readers are in the dark and can be who they are without being judged.