To improve the logic and flow of the essay, the writer
should revise sentence 5 by
read the passage
(1) i think that schools should switch from using paper
textbooks to using computer tablets, (2) textbooks were
effective in the pre-digital age, but now we live in a
technology-based society, so schools need to get with the
program and adopt a modern approach to learning, (3) in
fact, the chair of the federal communications commission
said that "it's time for the next stage" of learning with
tablets and pointed out how textbooks are often out of date.
(4) opponents argue that tablets aren't a good choice
because initially they're very expensive, (5) the secretary
of education pointed out that tablets can be updated
regularly, which saves money in the long run. (6) not to
mention the pluses of having the latest and greatest info!
(7) many experts agree that switching to tablets is
important for the future of education
a)replacing the word "money with the word "dough."
b)deleting the sentence to clarity the overall argument.
c)inserting the phrase "are awesomely fast atter "tablets"
to add personality
d)adding the transition "however at the beginning to
connect the ideas better

With this 3 questions ! really need them right! 1. the first continental congress met in philadelphia on september 5, 1774. all of the colonies sent representatives except georgia. this congress continued in session until october 26, 1774. by then it had passed resolutions calling for a boycott against british trade. the author's main purpose was a. to inform b. to persuade c. to instruct d. to give an opinion 2. identify the point of view of each of the following passages. "my second mate was a round-cheeked, silent young man, grave beyond his years, i thought; but as our eyes happened to meet i detected a slight quiver on his lips. i looked down at once. it was not my part to encourage sneering on board my ship. it must be said, too, that i knew very little of my officers." (joseph conrad, "the secret sharer") a. first person b. third person limited c. third person omniscient d. none of the above 3. identify the point of view of each of the following passages. "he had only himself to in his choice: his fortune was his own; for as to frank, it was more than being tacitly brought up as his uncle's heir, it had become so avowed an adoption as to have him assume the name of churchill on coming of age. it was most unlikely, therefore, that he should ever want his father's assistance. his father had no apprehension of it." (jane austen, emma) a. third person omniscient b. third person limited c. first person d. none of the above