Revising a passage with parallel structu
which revision of the underlined sentences creates a
parallel structure within the paragraph?
abc
because the recorder is familiar, children feel
comfortable playing it.
kelsey is an engineering student at lafayette college in
easton, pennsylvania. for her senior project, she and
her team are designing a robotic device to children
with disabilities play a musical instrument. they selected
the recorder. the recorder has several advantages over
other instruments. the recorder is plastic, making it low
low
cost and durable. the recorder is small, allowing it to be
held easily. another advantage is that many people are
familiar with the recorder. so children feel more
comfortable playing it.
the recorder is familiar, children feel more
comfortable playing it.
people are familiar with the recorder, which creates
comfort for children.
musical instruments need to feel comfortable to
children if we expect them to try to play.
( ) , .

(The recorded is familiar, helping children feel more comfortable playing it.)

Explanation:

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