How can i write a thesis about a car
"on saturday evening i was sitting on my couch reading a book. suddenly i heard sirens and i was obviously curious to see what was going on. i got up to look out my window so i could see what was happening. i got there just in time to see everything that happened, it was really crazy. i walked back to my couch so i could continue to read my book but right when i sat down, there was a knock at my door. it was a police officer asking me if i saw what happened. "
this is my story so far, how can i add a thesis to this? ? (its about a car accident for my english class)

Anwer: I would say that you have a thesis it's just that you could add more detail to it.

This is what I would say:

It was a cold, dark Saturday evening. I was reading my favorite book (enter here), when I heard sirens wailing outside my house. I got up from the couch, curious to see what was going on.  

Extra Notes:

I would also add on to your story about about what you saw outside of your window.

Hope this helps (:

i have read the novel roll of thunder hear my cry by mildred d. taylor.

1. this isn't like any other story i've read or watched because it is about a black family in mississippi right after slavery in the u.s. had become illegal. most of the novels i have read were about slavery. another point is that the author of the novel used symbolism in a way i haven't seen before. for example she uses thunder as something negative meaning something bad will happen. but by the end of the novel, she made thunder a good thing.

2.   one character that changed during the novel was stacey. stacey is the eldest child of the black logan family. around the begging of the novel stacey was avoiding the white boy jeremy simms. he had a dislike for jeremy's family. but at the end of the novel stacey began to like jeremy.

3. the author starts the novel with the problem that the children of the logan family have to avoid the white kid school bus while walking to school.

bc

explanation:

because it crosses through the circle twice