Which sentence would best create a strong, descriptive
image in the reader's mind if it were added after sentence 4?
the fifth day
had stuffed in
rm for a
v shadows
i fleetingly
d when the
as about
de man
he was casting quick, sideways glances in the direction
the bus should be coming from, and his left foot beat a
steady rhythm on the hot pavement.
all of the man's actions and mannerisms clearly indicated
his distress, and i could not staring at him while we
waited for the bus to finally arrive.
the man's behaviors led me to guess that he was
anxious about something, and i wondered if the tardy bus
could have caused such upset in someone.
in fact, he appeared to be so aggravated that i thought for
a second that he would explode with anger, but then he
just sat down and silently waited.
stop
fidened,
banter in
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