How could a change in emphasis best develop the events in this passage, making for a more interesting and exciting read?
the author could spend even more time discussing the preparations for takeoff.
the author could shorten details about mckee's preparations and describe how exciting and dangerous the rocket flight was and tell the
adventures that took place during colonization of saturn
the author could list and explain the different dials and switches in the cockpit to show how the advanced technology of the shuttle works, with
plenty of intricate technical detail
the author could focus the story solely on mckee's careful preparation for the trip, noting what he had for lunch and the clothes he wore.

12. involves getting to know and recording information about the characters in story such a physical characteristics action and ways in which they relate others characters and to the plot o a. close reading o b. character mapping o c. note-taking p

Healthcare costs are becoming an issue for many americans. in just two years, the average family has seen an increase of 3 percent in insurance costs. the increase rises to 25 percent when you include families who buy insurance on an exchange. at this rate, health care will soon be completely unaffordable for most americans. therefore, lowering the cost of health insurance must be a priority for lawmakers. which statement best explains why the argument is logical? a.)the argument incorporates empirical and anecdotal evidence. b.)the argument includes a strong counterclaim and a fair rebuttal. c.)the argument contains relevant reasons supported with facts and data. d.)the argument includes a personal experience as an emotional appeal.

In which sentence does the underlined adverb modify a verb? (i’ll put the words that are underlined in caps) a. water young plants often. b. water young plants rather often. c. we generally water young plants often. d. water very young plants often.