The following passages contain unnecessary jargon, padded phrases, and affectation. revise the passages to eliminate this language: i hereby designate mr. white, who has been holding the position and serving in the capacity of assistant technical supervisor, to be named and appointed to the position and function of deputy director of customer relations. in his newly elevated position, mr. white will report, in the first instance directly to the department director—that is, to me. purchasers of the enclosed substance should carefully and thoroughly follow the instructions provided herein for the use of the substance, and should in no case whatsoever consume, or otherwise partake of said substance without proceeding in the manner set forth on the accompanying set of circular instructions.