Use what you have learned in this lesson to revise the following passage for the appropriate audience and impact. select words and phrases that will strengthen this critical analysis essay. in the declaration of independence, thomas jefferson talks about independence through his use of big words and fancy argument skills . first, jefferson states his thesis, which makes it seem important that the colonists get independence. next, jefferson gives evidence against the king of england and how he mistreats the american colonies . finally, jefferson suggests that colonists should stop paying taxes and fight , which is the obvious answer to the colonists’ problems.

100 points and brainiest for if u go to my previous questions u can answer the 100 pointers think of an intense argument you had or witnessed sometime in your life. close your eyes and remember every detail. to turn this into a dramatic scene you will need to make changes that will make it make more sense to the audience. 500-600 words a description of the set up that explains what happened before the scene diction that matches the characters character objectives and obstacles are clearly conveyed a scene that escalates in dramatic intensity diction that is appropriate to the audience words that are not wasted in idle chit chat action (stage directions) that enhance the scene proper formatting for drama