Changing the sentence structure and how quickly events unfold in a story can affect which literally element?

When Hyperbaton is used, words and phrases exceed their conventional placements and meanings and result in a more complex and intriguing sentence structure (used to add more depth and interest to the sentence structure)

When Chronology is used, a manipulation in the time and events can be seen, and allows for the disorder of time. Relevance to all points of the past and future are made possible and the understanding of cause and effect is better made.

Ibelieve the topic sentence is [1] keeping my mind on my writing is not easy when i stay at my grandfather's ocean-side cottage. hope this : )