Select all the correct answers. which two strategies belong to the revision phase of writing?
1.check that the sequence of events makes logical sense.
2.brainstorm for thoughts and ideas on a memoir topic.
3.modify the writing in response to feedback from peers.
4.identify the audience and write down the purpose of the memoir.
5.list the people in the memoir and some characteristics to describe them.

1 and 3 are the answers.

Explanation:

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the correct answer is a. how to make proposal that works.

indeed, the register is quite formal and the tone is especially objective as it avoids the use of the first and second person singular (i, you) and opts instead for the third person plural which is more impersonal and focuses on the data and the argument that is being developed by the author. the formality adds the impression of respectability to the work and the impersonality adds objectivity to it.