Can somebody check and correct my closing paragraph to my persuasive essay so it sounds better?

as you can see a vegetarian lifestyle can benefit you tremendously. health-wise by reducing your risk of diseases such as heart disease, obesity, diabetes and some forms of cancer. financially saving you money on your trips to the grocery store and the economy. and not contributing to the slaughtering of innocent animals in factory farms which has been shown to pollute our environment.

As you can see, a vegetarian lifestyle can benefit you tremendously. Health-wise, it can reduce your risk of diseases such as heart disease, obesity, diabetes, and some forms of cancer. Financially, it can save you money on your trips to the grocery store and help the economy. Moreover, you won't contribute to the slaughtering of innocent animals in factory farms, which is not only cruel, but also has been shown to pollute our environment.

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