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Write a paragraph that contains only compound sentences your reader complain that is hard to follow your ideas and the paragraph because all your sentences are quite long which is the best method to revise the paragraph.

a. add a couple more compound sentences

b. change the compound sentences to complex.

c. change the compound to

d. change some of the sentences to simple and complex sentences

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