Assume that you are a proofreader employed in a publishing house. you often proofread documents using word processing programs before sending them for publication. write a paragraph on what would you point out during your review.

I would point out any spelling and grammar mistakes.  I would also give some tips on how to fix them if there was an issue that kept recurring.  I would also point out confusion of words or wording where I didn't understand something.  This often happens when you are reading, so if you aren't understanding it, there are sure to be others.  Lastly, I would point out an structure or organizational issues.  

huck's relationship with food is a prominent theme throughout the novel, and during his time on jackson's island and working his way down river, huck revels in and enjoys his ad hoc dining. in the first chapter, we observe huck is ironically trapped in a "civilized" world, when he would prefer to live freely in nature.

hm, switch the relative; nominative and indefinite; objective ? not too bright in the knowledge of the english.