Can anyone about my personal narrative writing.

A personal narrative essay is about a personal experience, so it is usually written in the first person. To maximize its impact, the essay should: Be written to have an emotional impact on the reader. Include a lot of references to sensory perceptions and emotions.

i think you should write from the heart and think what truely makes a hero. i can’t do this for you. even though this is it’s up to you.

- "d.)  describe the iroquois belief of how the earth was created. for the iroquois, there was no reason to explain the importance of rituals. also, as animists, they didn't need a special elaboration as to why animals are important or why they had a crucial role in the earth's creation. this is just an authentic myth that explains the creation of the earth. every culture has produced creation myths."