Me! i need

i need revising my illustration paragraph. my teacher assigned me a 150 point assignment! that requires me to revise my paragraph about a girl i was partnered up with. i’m really bad at sentence structure so if u can, me make a lot of good revision that will make this a a.

Some things that you could do is you could break this big long paragraph into 2 paragraphs so it doesn't seem boring to the reader. Maybe use more transition words to make seem very good, and check if you good vocabulary.

But other than that it's just information about your partner so you don't need to go all out on this assignment.

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answer: the essay describes the experience of the english narrator, possibly orwell himself, called upon to shoot an aggressive elephant while working as a police officer in burma.

explanation:

the complete subject is

lorna