At what point in thr oaqs method would you give advice about possible changes?

You can give helpful advice about possible changes in the 4th point of the OAQS method.

Explanation:

The OAQS method helps us to give clear, helpful and objective feedback about any piece of written work. It follows 4 points that are:

Observe: In this step, we see what is the purpose of the written work, what is the message and objective that it wants to convey, how did the writer make it.

Appreciate: The second step let us find a positive part of the reading and even when not everything is perfect we can praise the good parts of it.

Question: The third part gives us the chance to ask about extra information to understand the story better like background or personal motivations

Suggest: The last point or stage in this method is the one that allows us to make commentaries about the possible changes that can improve the written work.

the significance of the title, "the passing", is related to the fact that the main characters, who are three african-american descendant women, are passing as white. this means that, because of their light-coloured skins they look like white women. one of the three friends, clare, is married to a white man and she lives in a white community and she has never told her husband that she is black. the title can easily be connected to the idea of pretending to be someone you are not and of losing your real identity in order to be accepted by society.