Can someone me make my essay sound better?
"overall, the development of romeo throughout the play contributes to that even though everyone like love, no one realizes it’s a cause of consequences and violence by showing how he was depressed at the beginning of the play and how he was regretful about his decision fighting tybalt."
i can't think of a better way of stating the theme.
theme: even though everyone like love, no one realizes it’s a cause of consequences and violence

Btw everything that i edit it will be in all capitals

"Overall, the development of Romeo throughout the play contributes to that(WHAT IS THAT) even though everyone(USE ANOTHER WORD SUCH AS MANY OR A LARGE AMOUNT OF PEOPLE) like(USE ANOTHER WORD SUCH AS ENJOYS) love, no one realizes it’s a(THE NOT A) cause of consequences and violence by showing how he was depressed at the beginning of the play and how he was regretful about his decision fighting Tybalt."

I can't think of a better way of stating the theme.

Theme: even though everyone(LARGE AMOUNTS OF PEOPLE) like(ENJOY) love, no one realizes it’s a(THE) cause of consequences and violence

BESIDES MY EDITS THIS IS VERY GOOD..GOOD LUCK ON YOUR ESSAY:)

mi hermana "sabe" bailar salsa. "conoces" tu el monumento la mitad del mundo? raul y yo sabemos al profesor de matematicas.

translated: my sister "knows" how to dance salsa. "do you know" the monument half of the world? raul and i "know" the math professor.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)