Iliterally just need someone to edit this and see if it's a good introductory paragraph for an argumentive essay on whether or not discrimination against lgbt youth can be deadly.

american l. g.b. t. people have experienced many problems that jeopardize their short-term and long-term health, whether it be by social, economic, or medical standards. the research shows that the result of culture and of politics caused this community to be treated as lesser human beings, especially the youth of the community. america has an elephant in the room, especially when statistics show that l. g.b. t. youth are more likely to attempt or commit suicide than heterosexual youth due to discrimination. this discrimination against queer youth can be deadly because it can lead to a lack of parental care, higher risk of mental health issues, and suicide.

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Read the excerpt from act i of the importance of being earnest. lady bracknell. well, i must say, algernon, that i think it is high time that mr. bunbury made up his mind whether he was going to live or to die. this shilly-shallying with the question is absurd. . i should be much obliged if you would ask mr. bunbury, from me, to be kind enough not to have a relapse on saturday, for i rely on you to arrange my music for me. it is my last reception, and one wants something that will encourage conversation, particularly at the end of the season when every one has practically said whatever they had to say, which, in most cases, was probably not much. what aspect of lady bracknell’s behavior does wilde use to poke fun at the importance placed on frivolous events in formal society? her concern with a party instead of mr. bunbury’s health her interest in playing classical music at her reception her jealousy over algernon’s friendship with the sickly mr. bunbury her concern about the health of algernon’s friend

How dose religion today compared to the puritans idea of religion