The brooklyn bridge connect brooklyn and manhattan, once the longest suspension bridge in the world which revision most effectivly corrects the misplaced modifier

You'll want to move "once the longest suspension bridge in the world" to right after "The Brooklyn Bridge." As it's written now, the sentence implies Manhattan was once a suspension bridge. The sentence, then, will read "The Brooklyn Bridge, once the longest suspension bridge in the world, connects Brooklyn and Manhattan."

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