While she slept the alarm kept ringing in jamie's ear. according to the elements of style, what is the correct way to revise this sentence?

A subordinate or dependent clause is a oart of the sentence that provides additional meaning, but that cannot be a sentence by itself because the meaning that it provides is not complete. A dependent clause must be followed by a comma when it is at the beginning of the sentence. Therefore, the correct revision to this sentence is: While she slept, the alarm kept ringing in Jamie's ear.

i will have to go with 1.

hope this !

the aesthetic impact is that moment when you are relating spatially to the target. the "ai" occurs when you have an impression that includes both you and the target and is usually a spatial relationship.