In the miracle worker, annie sulliavan stresses that is the gateway which learning enters the mind of a child

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It is late evening, and Annie’s bedroom is the only room in the Keller house with the light on. Helen stands by Annie’s desk, playing with her doll. Annie is busy writing a letter, which she reads aloud. In the letter, she explains that nobody in the household has tried to control Helen: therefore, Annie will have to discipline Helen without “breaking her spirit.”

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.