Rewrite the following paragraph by adding dialogue and enhancing the voice by adding personality to the characters. the road was long. we were tired. i asked my dad when we would stop and he said he didn't know. i hoped it would be soon. the car was tiny and cramped with camping gear we would be using when we got to the campground.

The road was long and we were tired. "Dad when can we stop? I'm exhausted!" I asked my father. "I don't know." he mumbled. I hoped it would be soon. The car was tiny and cramped with camping gear we would be using when we got to the campground.

Explanation: This paragraph adds dialogue between the characters and personality.

Afirefighter is a rescuer extensively trained in firefighting, primarily to extinguish hazardous fires that threaten life, property and the environment as well as to rescue people and animals from dangerous situations.  just cut some parts to make them shorter and add some of your facts or what describes them most. or what they are supposed to do.